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2010年12月大學英語四級寫作提高筆記

43. As for me， I'm in favor of the opinion that education is not complete with graduation， for the following reasons：

就我而言，我同意教育不應該隨著畢業(yè)而結束的觀點，有以下原因：

44. It is commonly accepted that no college or university can educate its students by the time they graduate.人們普遍認為高校是不可能在畢業(yè)的時候教會他們的學生所有知識的。 45. Even the best possible graduate needs to continue learning before she or he becomes an educated person.即使最優(yōu)秀的畢業(yè)生，要想成為一個博學的人也要不斷地學習。

46. It is commonly thought that our society had dramatically changed by modern science and technology， and human had made extraordinary progress in knowledge and technology over the recent decades.人們普遍認為我們的現(xiàn)代科技使我們的社會發(fā)生了巨大的變化，近幾十年人類在科技方面取得了驚人的進步。

47. Now people in growing numbers are beginning to believe that learning new skills and knowledge contributes directly to enhancing their job opportunities or promotion opportunities.現(xiàn)在越來越多的人開始相信學習新的技術和知識能直接幫助他們獲得工作就會或提升的機會。

48. An investigation shows that many older people express a strong desire to continue studying in university or college.一項調查顯示許多老人都有到大學繼續(xù)學習的愿望。

49. For the majority of people， reading or learning a new skill has become the focus of their lives and the source of their happiness and contentment after their retirement.對大多數(shù)人來講，退休以后，閱讀或學習一項新技術已成為他們生活的中心和快樂的來源。

50. For people who want to adopt a healthy and meaningful life style， it is important to find time to learn certain new knowledge. Just as an old saying goes： it is never too late to learn.對于那些想過上健康而有意義的生活的人們來說，找時間學習一些新知識是很重要的，正如那句老話：活到老，學到老

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51. There is a general debate on the campus today over the phenomenon of college or high school students' doing a part-time job.

對于大學或高中生打工這一現(xiàn)象，校園里進行著廣泛的爭論。

52. By taking a major-related part-job， students can not only improve their academic studies， but gain much experience， experience they will never be able to get from the textbooks.

通過做一份和專業(yè)相關的工作，學生不僅能夠提高他們的專業(yè)能力，而且能獲得從課本上得不到的經驗。

53. Although people‘s lives have been dramatically changed over the last decades ， it must be admitted that， shortage of funds is still the one of the biggest questions that students nowadays have to face because that tuition fees and prices of books are soaring by the day.

近幾十年，管人們的生活有了驚人的改變，但必須承認，由于學費和書費日益飛漲，資金短缺仍然是學生們面臨的最大問題之一。

54. Consequently， the extra money obtained from part-time job will strongly support students to continue to their study life.

因此，業(yè)余工作掙來的錢將強有力地支持學生們繼續(xù)他們的求學生活。

55. From what has been discussed above， we may safely draw a conclusion that part-time job can produce a far-reaching impact on students and they should be encouraged to take part-time job， which will benefit students and their family， even the society as a whole.

通過上面的討論，我們不難得出結論：業(yè)余工作對學生們會產生深遠的影響，我們應鼓勵學生從事業(yè)余工作，這將有利于學生和他們的家庭，甚至整個社會。

56. These days ， people in growing numbers are beginning to complain that work is more stressful and less leisurely than in past. Many experts point out that， along with the development of modern society ， it is an inevitable result and there is no way to avoid it.

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現(xiàn)在，越來越多的人們開始抱怨工作比以前更有壓力。許多專家指出這是現(xiàn)代社會發(fā)展必然的結果，無法避免。

57. It is widely acknowledged that computer and other machines have become an indispensable part of our society ， which make our life and work more comfortable and less laborious.

人們普遍認為計算機和其他機器已經成為我們社會必不可少的一部分。它們使我們的生活更舒適，減少了大量勞動

58. At the same time， along with the benefits of such machines， employees must study knowledge involved in such machines so that they are able to

l ever be ours.

58. "by doing ?" 結構。這個結構的意思是" 通過(做) ??" ，但翻譯實踐中不能拘泥于這種釋義，不少情況下需要靈活變通。

The hippos, by depositing dung in the water, fed the fish that support the storks that destroy the rare trees.

59. 下面例句為一倒裝句，主語很長，而且又含有非常復雜的句型。這是以形容詞作表語的倒裝，翻譯實踐中多把倒裝部分譯到最前面。

No less obvious is the fact there are great numbers of people so constituted or so brought up that they cannot get so much pleasure out of processes and experiences resulting in a poorer life less full of meaning.

60. "what?of" 句型

I can not say of myself what Johnson said of Pope: He never passed a fault unamended by indifference, nor quitted it by despair. I do not write as I do; I write as I can.

151. On no account can we ignore the value of knowledge.

我們絕對不能忽視知識的價值。

152. It is time the authorities concerned took proper steps to solve the traffic problems.

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該是有關當局采取適當?shù)拇胧﹣斫鉀Q交通問題的時候了。

153. Those who violate traffic regulations should be punished.

違反交通規(guī)則的人應該受到處罰。

154. There is no one but longs to go to college.

人們都希望上大學。

155. Since the examination is around the corner， I am compelled to give up doing sports.

既然考試迫在眉睫，我不得不放棄作運動。

156. It is conceivable that knowledge plays an important role in our life. 可想而知，知識在我們的一生中扮演一個重要的角色

157. Summer is sultry. That’s the reason why I don’t like it.

夏天很悶熱，這就是我不喜歡它的原因。

158. The progress of the society is based on harmony.

社會的進步是以和諧為基礎的。

159. We should bring home to people the value of working hard.

我們應該讓人們知道努力的價值。

160. Taking exercise is closely related to health.

作運動與健康息息相關。

161. We should get into the habit of keeping good hours.

我們應該養(yǎng)成早睡早起的習慣。

162. The condition of our traffic leaves much to be desired.

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我們的交通狀況令人不滿意。

163. Smoking has a great influence on our health.

抽煙對我們的健康有很大的影響。

164. Reading does good to our mind.

讀書對心靈有益。

165. Overwork does harm to health.

工作過度對健康有害。

166. Pollution poses a great threat o our existence.

污染對我們的生存造成巨大威脅。

167. We should do our best to achieve our goal in life.

我們應盡全力去達成我們的人生目標。

168. Weather a large family is a good thing or not is a very popular topic， which is often talked about not only by city residents but by farmers as well.

家庭人口多好還是家庭人口少好是一個非常通俗的主題，不僅是城里人，而且農民都經常討論這個問題

169. As is known to all， fake and inferior commodities harm the interests of consumers.

眾所周知，假冒偽劣商品損害了消費者的利益。

170. Today an increasing number of people

中間段(例論法)

* 作者根據(jù)個人經歷或所聞所見，列舉事實說明或支持文章主題。從而使讀者確切地了解其觀點的含義或依據(jù)。

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* 例證的組織可按時間順序、典型性、重要性等進行排列。一般說來最典型、最重要的例子放在最前面(以引起讀者興趣) 或最后面(以加深讀者印象) 。

* 具體寫法手段有：

條件法/具體細節(jié)法/對比法/科技法/歷史法，下面一例就是具體法代表：

主題：北京天氣壞

In spring, the weather in Beijing can be very bad. It is often windy and dusty here. In spring, the wind may blow all day long, the air is then filled with fine dust which sometimes shuts out the sun. There is no escape of the fine dust. It gets into, your eyes, yours nostrils, and your hair and penetrates through the closed windows.

結尾段

結尾是文章的總結和思想的最后升華，它應起到再次肯定和強調主題的效果。

高分作文的結尾段應短小有力，言簡意賅，又意味深長。具體說來結尾段主要有以下4種表述方法：

(1) 重述或總結前面的主題。

將前面各段的內容，換一種方式進行總結、再述。

(2) 提出一個與主題相關的問題。

這一問題的答案其實在文中已描述清楚，可以說明知故問，目的是要讀者同意作者本人的觀點。如“As the reasons listed above, why don’t you choose the public school for your child?”(關于公立、私立學校的主題)

(3) 提出預測或希望

作者對上面的闡述觀點作一些補充和例外情況的說明，這樣顯得文章活潑、生動又不失客觀、說明性。如：關于“電視廣告”一文結尾“In a word, TV advertisement, I think, are a newborn thing in the development of our economy, of course, there is much room for improvement in the TV ads. I believe the TV ads will benefit both the advertisers and comsumers.”

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又如關于5天工作制的主題：“I hope someday we will have a four-day work policy ”。

(4) 提出建議或改進措施。

作者就上面問題進行分析、比較之后，往往提出一些解決方法供讀者參考，這種方法同樣也具有一定的渲染力。

寫作必背句子匯總

1. Television and radio are almost the most powerful media compared with other means of mass communications like newspaper and magazine.

2. And media, is I understand, couldn’t be implementing the principles of fairness, objectiveness, all-roundedness and above all, the responsibility without any supervision.

3. If a country is democratic, media censorship would be simpler because the government only needs to care for the program ’s social effect, such as the possible consequence of a movie about drug on teenagers.

4. Where was the censorship which may prevent such a disastrous test?

5. It can and will warn the government of some problems, like corruption, so that people can trust their governors more if they see the problems solved.

6. And this attitude — letting the audience decide what ’s good for them with their own eyes, ears and minds, will guarantee a social stability in the long run.

7. Like the tangible environment, that is the air we breathe, the water we drink and the food on our dinner table, the world ’s energy resources are the common wealth of all human beings on the globe.

8. The disequilibrium between nations makes it unavoidable and indeed very necessary to have worldwide cooperation.

9. The cooperation enables different nations, no matter energy rich or poor ones, to sensibly explore and make use of their energy resources by adjusting the supply and demand, and thus to avoid the so-called over-exploration and blind-consumption of the resources.

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42. In this case, it is better for all nations to work together and take concrete measures, such as restricting the total amount of adult materials on the whole flowing into the Internet, keeping close track of the adult materials and setting up firewalls, drawing regulations to prevent as well as to control such problems, conducting continuous further research and experiments on the subject, and at the same time, educate children and adults as well with the consequences that adult materials have on children.

43. Another aspect of the saying that “public buildings reveal much about the society that builds them ” is about what kind of new buildings are constructed most nowadays.

44. As a mirror, it reflects the government ’s and people ’s value about education.

45. In fact, making plans, like setting goals, can make me aware of where I’m heading, avoid indulging in time-wasting activities, help me make the right decisions and more importantly, be ready for success.

46. People must live together and cooperate to survive the sometimes fierce nature — they might be threatened by coldness, hunger and even worse, the attack of ferocious animals.

47. It’s not wrong to say that the primary duty and concern of a corporation is to make money, but it’ll be wrong to infer then conflict is inevitable when the corporation must also acknowledge a duty to serve society, because making money is a means, not an end.

48. To quote Fortune Magazine, “Business education has become largely

irrelevant to business practice? MBA lack creativity, people skills, aptitude for teamwork and the ability to speak with clarity and conciseness — all hallmarks of a good manager.”

49. An old Chinese saying goes, “History mirrors the present and the future ”. Such people do not gain the trust of others through their verbal and nonverbal behaviors either, because, without literature, they can ’t get their messages cross properly.

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50. Whether we are at work, at home, or anywhere else, our lives are tied to machines.

51. This kind of being tied to machines gives some people an impression of being chained.

52. The digital revolution sweeping through every corner of the business community is have its share of impacts — both large and small — in our lives.

53. And believe it or not, at the end of that article “On Not Answering the Telephone ”, the same author says, “I have just been handed a slip of paper to say that somebody is waiting to speak to me on the telephone.”

54. I agree with the opinion that job security and salary should be based on employee performance, not on years of service.

55. By and large, rewarding employees primarily for years of service does a lot harm than good to both eh employees and organization.

56. Government does have the responsibility to support art sand fulfil its role as the principal sponsor of art and cultural development of the nation.

57. As we all know, ideas originate at the grassroots, and spring up in the streets, pass from galleries to museums and from clubs to concert halls, then return to the streets via radio, TV, and movies.

58. The boundary between private and public is one threshold where acts of communication, including those carried out through artworks, can become not only offensive but illegal, and as David Price argues “conduct becomes prohibited when the threshold is crossed and private choices encroaches upon public domain”.

59. But it is often difficult to judge what is offensive and what is not, and what is private and what is public.

60. Today more and more governments are taking as their responsibility to keep the delicate balance of safeguarding freedom of expression while minimizing the very real risks posed by expressions which harm or threaten to harm.

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61. They think it is too much to expect young people to bridge the gap between intellectual knowledge and the kinds of citizenship skills, attitudes and values they will need in the “real world”.

62. Their utmost goals are in the pursuit of excellence in both academic and other domains of education, and are delivering educational outcomes that meet the needs and expectations of the society.

63. If schools are to serve the entire society, then it is by no means appropriate.

64. While a powerful business leader may play an important part in the course of a community or a nation, however, a government official has a far more decisive role and thus has more opportunity to influence the community and the nation.

65. So, the energies of the former group are directed toward leading people of a region or a nation to a commonly-recognized blueprint.

66. Thirdly, government officials influence the direction a community or a nation takes through changing the way people think about what is desirable, possible, and necessary.

67. While there are many strategies for managing a business or an enterprise, for example, downsizing, teamworking, reducing layers of management etc., the best strategy remains to be the searching for the most capable people and the offering of the biggest possible authority to them

42. In this case, it is better for all nations to work together and take concrete measures, such as restricting the total amount of adult materials on the whole flowing into the Internet, keeping close track of the adult materials and setting up firewalls, drawing regulations to prevent as well as to control such problems, conducting continuous further research and experiments on the subject, and at the same time, educate children and adults as well with the consequences that adult materials have on children.

43. Another aspect of the saying that “public buildings reveal much about the society that builds them ” is about what kind of new buildings are constructed most nowadays.